Writing+A+Description

=We are learning how to write a description.=

This term our writing focus has been on descriptive writing. Writing to describe a moment in time. We talked about what we our learning to do (W.A.L.T.) and what our Success Criteria will be (our signposts of success).



We started our descriptive writing by working on our introductory paragraph. The opening of the story that will grab the reader's attention. We made a Descriptive Writing Checklist so we could see how well we are doing and to help us give feedback.

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Here we are sharing our stories, receiving and giving feedback.

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Hanna <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">media type="youtube" key="-Rhr3Vm-nfk" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Lee media type="youtube" key="qccdQkzIyvk" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Justin media type="youtube" key="ATiPng6L6tE" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Taine media type="youtube" key="kNDrG7NsOks" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Olivia media type="youtube" key="uKB0Jv4fuFc" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Sophia media type="youtube" key="RtwezctUfp8" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Leilani media type="youtube" key="gKKFOcNs35I" width="560" height="315" <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Leilani receiving feedback media type="youtube" key="72J6uqY2_O8" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Jesse media type="youtube" key="rvdzh5A4tcQ" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Valentino media type="youtube" key="kNZTskZWOfk" width="560" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Rylee media type="youtube" key="Mz2Ei3mOHAI" width="420" height="315"

<span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Our next learning steps are to use our feedback to improve our stories, <span style="font-family: 'Comic Sans MS',cursive; font-size: 130%;">Check in later to see how our descriptive writing had developed.